1. I need to improve on being clear of what I want to present to the readers. For example, if I mention 'we', I need to indicate beforehand to whom I was referring to.
2. I need to be more familiar with verb tenses so that I will be able to use them appropriately.
3. I want to improve on my use of transition words and phrases as well.
From your presentation, I am able to see how far you've come in terms of using of transition words and phrases. keep up the good work as we finish the race for this semester!
ReplyDeleteBy the way, I'm Jerry!
DeleteHey Fazira,
ReplyDeleteI am sure you have definitely improved in this few areas mentioned above. As a hardworking and persistent individual, I am sure you have improved in these few areas. Don't forget all these small little tips and hope you use it in the future. From your presentation, it says it all. GOOD JOB!!
Anyways, have an awesome holiday before its all over.